Whisper to my skin
that this will not last forever
For me save your radical prayer
I will say mine for you
Tomorrow, in thousand years, once again
We will be free
to say what we think
and think about what we do
Judith
Radical prayer
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I really like this one, “tomorrow, in thousand years” really appeals to me. E.T. 🙂
I really like the meditative tone of your poem. Sure enough, we can be free. 🙂
Thank you guys for your comments:)
Judith, I always enjoy your poems so much! I really like this:
For me save your radical prayer
I will say mine for you
I can’t wait for your next poem! Hopefully tomorrow and not in thousands years! 🙂
M.
Marie, well, I am glad you liked it and that you chose the part of the poem which was actually the central idea around which I created the rest:)
Judith