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Radical prayer

Whisper to my skin

that this will not last forever

 

For me save your radical prayer

I will say mine for you

 

Tomorrow, in thousand years, once again

We will be free

to say what we think

and think about what we do

 

Judith

5 Comments

  1. Jaroslav Suchý

    I really like this one, “tomorrow, in thousand years” really appeals to me. E.T. 🙂

  2. adamigo

    I really like the meditative tone of your poem. Sure enough, we can be free. 🙂

  3. Judith

    Thank you guys for your comments:)

  4. Marie

    Judith, I always enjoy your poems so much! I really like this:

    For me save your radical prayer

    I will say mine for you

    I can’t wait for your next poem! Hopefully tomorrow and not in thousands years! 🙂

    M.

    • Judith

      Marie, well, I am glad you liked it and that you chose the part of the poem which was actually the central idea around which I created the rest:)

      Judith

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