Finally almost here, just can’t wait
The period of being free from tedious studying
Countless hours of working and sleepless nights
Finally flying away to get to know a new country
Ancient Scotland to discover, what a thrill
Maybe hiking in the Alps or navigating a river
Camping and watching the stars
Enjoying the time of rest when time slows down
Being with friends as much as possible
Even though it’s just for a short while, it’s so needed
– Adam
Dear Adam,
I really like the repetition of “finally” I think it expresses your current feelings… Maybe an article before the new country? But you may have wanted it this way.
Anyway, have a great summer 🙂
Jarek
Dear Jarek,
thank your for the feedback. You are rught about the article, I just forgot. Thanks for telling me.
Have a great summer, too, filled with beautiful poetry. 🙂
Adam
Dear Adam,
I like your poem, but I certainly need to find out about the poems that don´t rhyme… How does it work? Are there any rules regarding to poem writing?
Dear Jitka,
I usually write so called free verse which means there is no rhytmical pattern and my poems don’t rhyme. You can have some rhytmical pattern even though your poems don’t rhyme, basic idea about rhythm is to have same number of stressed syllables in each line. For the beginning you don’t need to mess with it if you don’t want to. Just enjoy writing and you’ll see what’s natural for you. 🙂